Work-in-progress of Make it Juicy Presentation posted; playtesting needed!

Hey all. I’ve posted on GameJolt the work-in-progress presentation of Make it Juicy: 10 easy ways to make your game more engaging. I could use some playtesting to confirm each revision of the game can be considered improvements to the previous one.

Here’s the link!
http://gamejolt.com/profile/omiya-games/176961/